If things were perfect
Here you can find the comments I’ve left on my classmates’ blogs to help them to eradicate the mistakes.
I went first ont Julie E.’s blog. It was almost perfect in my opinion. The only comment I’ve writed was:
Hello. I’ve just started browsing the blogs to suggest my correction and how lucky you are ! You’re the first on the list
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But you’re lucky twice. I haven’t found huge mistakes. The only thing I have a doubt about is “to be indulgent with”. According to WordReference, it would be “to” or “toward”. But the rest is clean !
Enjoy your “holidays”.
Her answer was:
Hi Joris !
It seems there is actually a mistake with my sentence: “please, be indulgent with my grammar !” the structure “be indulgent with” is correct, but I should have write “be indulgent with me” and not “with my grammar”. So, we can remenber the following structure: “to be indulgent with _*sb*_”.
Thank you for your shrewdness!
On Julie T.’s blog, the only post was the transcription from the podcast The Linguist. That’s why I’ve left it like it was.
Julien’s blog seems to be clean. The only mistake was already corrected by Julie.
Karine’s one was well filled but it was also well written. I’ve just given my opinion in a fiery debate about the use of “interest in” and “interest on”.
The main part of Laetitia‘s mistakes was already corrected by Karine who did a great job. But thanks to my determination I found some little things to say !
Hi ! It’s hard to find new mistakes when Karine has already visited a blog. But here are two little things I’m not sure about.
First, I wouldn’t write “an interview about” but “an interview with”.
Then, (I know I’m niggling ^^) Spore is only one game. I think the “s” is not needed. But it’s detail !
It’s me again !
In my opinion, there is a little problem with the verb “improve” in your sentence. I think “to improve my english” would be more accurate.
